May 31, 2012

Gingerbread Man meets the Woodcutter and King Midas - by Dylan

Once upon a time there was a Gingerbread Man. He had blue candy and a tie. I visited the Woodcutter. "Don't crush me, Woodcutter," I said. "I'd rather eat you," said the Woodcutter. "Aaaah!" I said and I ran away. I hope I lost him. I did not lose him. "Come back here, I want to give you a prize," said the Woodcutter. "Okay," I said. SNATCH! "Help me! Help me! King Midas, help me! Thank you!" I said.  "Now I can finally touch you," said King Midas. "You touch yourself!" I said. "Run, run, as fast as you can! You can't catch me, I'm the Gingerbread Man!" Here comes more trouble. I kept running and I got scraped and hid. "Huh, huh, huh," I panted. "I'm not eaten. Yay!" I'm so, so, so happy. I have to run away and everyone came to me. "Come on," I said. A fox was chasing me. Impossible! I'm going to have to run even faster. Trip! Ow! Keep running. A hunter? Come on! And they passed out, and I lived happily ever after.

12 comments:

ldonovan@rsu18.org said...

Wow, Dylan, what an exciting story! Glad you lived happily ever after.
Ms. Donovan, MHS art teacher

Our Classroom Family said...

Thank you for reading it. It was real hard to think of all those ideas.
Dylan

Anonymous said...

That was an exciting story! I really enjoyed reading it. The name "King Midas" in french is "roi Midas".

Amanda
French III
Student M.H.S.

Anonymous said...

This story is so suspenseful! J'aime (I like) all of the characters!

Maddie
French III student, MHS

Anonymous said...

This was a very cool story. I love your King Midas character!!!! The word for king in French is le roi.

Kaileigh Lenentine French 3 MHS Student

Anonymous said...

Such a creative fairy tale! Vous êtes un grand conteur! that means you are a great story teller in french.

Aaron
French III
Student
M.H.S.

Anonymous said...

I like that you have people talking in your story. It is very exciting with a lot of things happening. The word for prize in French is le prix. Keep up the great stories!

Anna Schwartzberg
French III Student
MHS

Anonymous said...

That was one of the most exhilarating and interesting stories I have ever read, at least you got away. The word for hunter is chasseur.

Anonymous said...

Your story is very exciting! C'est bien qu'ils ne t'ont pas mangé (It is good that they did not eat you)!
Bridgette
French III Student MHS

Anonymous said...

Everyone must have been tired after all that running! I am tired in French is "Je suis fatigué."

Good work, keep writing stories!

Madame Boisvert
French Teacher
MHS

Anonymous said...

Everyone must have been tired after all that running! I am tired in French is "Je suis fatigué."

Good work, keep writing stories!

Madame Boisvert
French Teacher
MHS

Anonymous said...

Great story Dylan! A lot of action and running!! Phew, I am tired from just reading it. Awesome Job! -Mom